Wednesday, October 04, 2006

Dua

Aaj phir unki yaad satayi,
Aaj phir unke liye aankh bhar aayi.
Mere khuda dua mangta hoon uske liye,
Jise is "shareef" pe daya bhi nahi aayi.

[Written by me,
Will refine soon]
-DK "Shareef"

7 comments:

Anonymous said...

very nice keep it up


Yash- Toronto -Canada

Saurabh said...

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Saurabh said...

kya DK, tu "shareef" kab se ho gaya? shaadi kar li aur ahmed ne hame bataya bhi nahi?? :D

DK/SarDaar said...

@sbjoshi,
pata hi laga kab pyar ho gaya aur kab shaadi :)

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Lt.(Dr) sapana said...

gud
better u write ' gareeb' instead of 'shareef'

Lt.(Dr) sapana said...

Aaj phir unki yaad satayi,
Aaj phir unke liye aankh bhar aayi.
Mere khuda dua mangta hoon uske liye,
Jise is "gareeb" pe daya bhi nahi aayi.